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Thursday, February 25, 2010

To disappear with you


Gossamer thoughts
lifting off
arising from
the formless pits
of consciousness

A thread
lands
somewhere
causing a tremor
across the landscape
I've learned to call
Me

Did you feel it...
too?
Have we touched
without...
reaching out?
Kissed
without...
trembling?
Merged
without ever
leaving
this sanctuary
of unspoken
love?

Even in this
gossamer moment
Eternity waits
while I turn off
the stars
and roll up the
oceans
to disappear
with you
in a place
called
heaven
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12 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 25, 2010 at 11:41 PM

    "Longings Enchantments and Sacred Space" has been included in this weeks Sites To See. I hope you like the image I featured, and I hope this helps to attract many new visitors here.

    http://asthecrackerheadcrumbles.blogspot.com/2010/02/sites-to-see_26.html

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  2. Joanne OlivieriFebruary 26, 2010 at 2:14 PM

    Sheer eloquence and a photo that commingles with the passion of the verse.

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  3. gerry boydJune 4, 2010 at 6:31 AM

    lovely gentle words and images. love the tone of this. bravo!

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  4. EllumbraAugust 29, 2010 at 8:25 AM

    Beautiful writing - as always.

    Gossamer threads - reminds me that the other day I thoughtlessly swept away a spider's web from the wing mirror of my car.
    However - the very next day - it was back again in its full and fresh glory.

    Clever little spider - turning my car into a trawler for his supper as I drive down the country lanes.

    Tingling?

    XXX

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  5. EeshieJanuary 20, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    HI! I'm Eeshie. I just want to say that you've got a really AWESOME blog. Such deep poems...
    Please take a look at mine, if you can.

    idontskinnydipichunkydunk.blogspot.com

    See you there! :)

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  6. UnknownMay 1, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    "Longings Enchantments and Sacred Space" has been included in this weeks A Sunday Drive. I hope this helps to attract even more new visitors here.

    http://asthecrackerheadcrumbles.blogspot.com/2011/05/sunday-drive.html

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  7. Dr. GaryJune 8, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    Lucy,
    You've spun these words into a beautiful reverie!
    Ethereal. Lovely.
    Gary

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  8. Lucy LopezAugust 17, 2011 at 8:35 AM

    Hi All!

    I've been remiss in keeping this blog current and worse still, for not responding to your comments sooner. I hope you'll forgive me.

    Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your beautiful comments. These are the conversations I love to have - heart to heart :)

    I'll be dropping by your blogs to catch up with you...Till then, stay blissful!

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  9. John BuchananSeptember 28, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    I really enjoyed this, thank you.

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  10. John BuchananOctober 6, 2011 at 1:42 AM

    I love the words you use in 'To disappear with you' it has real feeling, and a very light touch. I find the line breaks slightly disconcerting though, they force pauses where perhaps they interupt the flow. That said the words are Superb. Thank you.

    I have put a link to your page on the 'Blogs*' page of my blog, I hope you don't mind.

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  11. John BuchananNovember 22, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    I love the imigary of this poem. Thank you.

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  12. Sujoy GhoshMarch 23, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    A feast for the senses! Beautiful!

    Sujoy

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